Some Advice Please

I’m trying to practice my segmenting a little bit and I could really use all the advice I can get. I have received some from another user but I find it difficult to make the changes like they suggested. They said that I have to be careful about the timing of the segments because it differentiates between the languages. I tried to do that with this one but I still don’t think I got it right.

Would you mind checking out the video and giving me your inputs? Thank you.

HI, if you want to improve your segmenting why don’t you enroll in the Segmenter 101 proyect? I think is an amazing opportunity for that.

I don’t see a problem ^^
You did well~~