Some Advice Please

I’m trying to practice my segmenting a little bit and I could really use all the advice I can get. I have received some from another user but I find it difficult to make the changes like they suggested. They said that I have to be careful about the timing of the segments because it differentiates between the languages. I tried to do that with this one but I still don’t think I got it right.

Would you mind checking out the video and giving me your inputs? Thank you.

http://www.viki.com/videos/1027186v-promo

HI, if you want to improve your segmenting why don’t you enroll in the Segmenter 101 proyect? I think is an amazing opportunity for that.
http://www.viki.com/tv/723c-the-segmenter-101-project

I don’t see a problem ^^
You did well~~